Thursday, April 10, 2014

Character Spotlight 6: Daryl

Over 1000 views!!!  Yeah, only took me...what, a year and a half?  Well, anyway, I don't have much news right now.  I've started re-writing the next chapter, which is a cooldown chapter, after a big event we need some time to breathe.  However, I've been smashed by work and studying for an exam, not school related, work related, that I have this weekend.  So, not much writing going on at the moment.  I do have something for you, which I made before life came crashing down, but...this is gonna be a slow month.  Let me just throw that out there.

Sorry about that.  Anyway, without further ado, here's a character spotlight on Daryl.  And yes, I know the name sounds like a guy's -_-u  It's meant to be a homage to Darril from Final Fantasy 6, who was a woman and who, in the original release as Final Fantasy 3, which I played to death, I believe her name was spelled Daryl.  Darl is how I always pronounced it.  Might change that for the final release in book form if we get there.

Now, character spotlight



Character Spotlight 6: Daryl

            Daryl's probably the character who has gone through the most change from my original design.  I'd be hard pressed to pick a real inspiration for her, as she was originally meant to be far worse than she turned out to be.  I suppose you could say all the good people who broke my heart went into Daryl, as she's a good person, but tragically flawed.  However, that being said, she is rather fun to write for because she comes from a different place than almost any other character in the main cast.

            Daryl is a young woman with long purple hair, because this is my world so shut up, and who is training to join the clergy.  In this world, the clergy are actually a powerful organization who rule the theocratic Lucaria.  Being a clergy member means that you will have access to greater educational tools, but also that you will be able to have more choice in your life.  Being a teacher, a doctor, a warrior, politician or just someone who spreads the word of Shanadia and the lord prophet, are all options.  It's a common path for rich, talented children because it allows them upward mobility with only scholastic effort and magic training being the major determiners of their future.  Daryl follows this path because it was easy and she had a knack for it.

            If that last description didn't make it clear, Daryl is a rich child.  She grew up the daughter of a merchant who made his home in Gesthal and both she and her mother are supported by her father while he is away, selling wares.  He is able to purchase books on apocra, magic, history, anything to help Daryl improve her chances at being accepted into the clergy.  As such, Daryl is a good mouthpiece for certain types of information in the story.  She can give good practical information, but can also be useful for spouting misinformation other characters need to either correct or add to.  However, I'd say it's fair that all three girls act as surrogates for the audience, so this isn't too shocking.  Mina knows some things about the races and Telnumbra, Celine knows of neeg, apocra, and living on the road, and Daryl knows about history, magic, legends, and the like.

            On the surface, Daryl is a snob.  She is elitist, bigoted, prejudiced, and happens to think she knows everything.  She lives for praise and will sometimes overstep her boundaries because she believes she's above consequence.  This is often why she antagonizes Celine, though since they have known each other for so long it has become more akin to their way of expressing affection than true snobbery.  Hence the two nicknames they spit out at each other.  Daryl is a very intelligent young woman, however her vast stores of knowledge are somewhat hindered by her lack of practical experience.  She has lived her whole life in Gesthal and never seen the sights that Mina or Celine have, so she tends to not know how to handle new situations.

            In the original draft, Daryl was going to be far more frightened, bigoted, and dubious about Aeon than even in this one.  More important than all that in this version, however was her status as friends with Mina and Celine.  Not just friends, but very close friends.  So, she's actually pretty dependable when it comes down to it.  More than that, they help temper her bigotry, prejudices, and misconceptions, so Daryl's more honest nature shines through.

            Underneath all the arrogance and clergical dogma that she has absorbed through her readings and her training with Angelo and the other priests, Daryl tends to be a very honest girl.  She won't hide her emotions, be they disgust or concern, and can overlook a fierce exterior if she knows there's more to that.  There also exists a great thirst for knowledge within her, so she will do what she needs to in order to expand her information, both so she can advance in her chosen life path, but also for her own sake.  Daryl, despite being a whiner, a wimp, and a coward, also stands by her friends till the bitter end, which helps with Nerise as she proves to be quite loyal, despite the fright the little girl gave to her.

            Even though Daryl has been pampered, there is also an undercurrent of stress and obligation to her character.  She fears failure and thrives on praise.  However this means that she is like a college student at the finish line to graduation.  It's do or die for her and failure is worse than death.  She's not afraid to work, as she's trained hard with Angelo and the others to the detriment of her social life, basically only having Mina and Celine stick with her up till the current point, however she tries to hide her fear with bravado, and often ends up as the socially awkward one of the group because of it.

            In spite of her status as the "smart one" in Gesthal, Daryl doesn't have many friends, due to her toxic personality and her heavy work constraints.  If her time in Acacia weren't informing her almost as much as her readings, she probably wouldn't be able to continue her visits.  Daryl hasn't had time to think about friends, but is slowly realizing their value not just through Mina and Celine, but through Nerise and the others.

            I want to show change through Daryl, because she is kind of like the baseline for Lucaria.  Perhaps not as fanatically against Telnumbran's as some, but still fearful and prejudiced.  However, not above change, either.  Daryl is a character who has slowly opened up, gotten less haughty, save for when she's with Celine, and learned that sometimes...the absolute truth you knew isn't as solid as you thought it was.

            Daryl is also a mage, for those not paying attention.  She hasn't been focusing her training on elemental magic, so Mina is better at it than her, but she can do a great deal more with holy magic.  Daryl can heal, create weak barriers out of Leyline energy, and conjure up light.  She is very good at channeling Leyline energy and giving it form, making her an interesting contrast to Mina, who struggles with her own training, but is better at elemental magic, while Daryl is able to use holy magic with ease, but cannot use elemental magic readily.

            Daryl's relationship with Mina is probably the deepest she's had.  It's not as deep as Mina and Celine's but Daryl has known Mina even longer than Celine.  She saved Daryl from getting hit by a patron of Kano's bar, while Daryl's former friends, who she lost due to her workload, did nothing.  This taking place after Daryl had played the Holier than Thou card on her.  That deeply affected her and puts Mina on a pedestal to Daryl.  She hasn't been able to get as close as Celine, due to her workload, but Mina has always been there to talk when Daryl needs it or listen and has always put up with Daryl's abrasive personality...so she values Mina deeply and tries to be as understanding as her friend.

            Despite friction with Celine due to their nearly polar opposite social stations, Daryl and Celine grew closer thanks to Mina, who didn't want her two friends to fight.  They still do, but after the years they've known each other, it is less hurtful and more out of habit and a strange form of affection.  Daryl and Celine each look down on the other to a degree, but understand when the time for pettiness is over and they need to be there for the other.  In many ways, Daryl envies Celine for her closeness to Mina and for her cool head during crises.  They do truly care for one another.

            Daryl has a healthy respect for the clergy, especially Angelo and his men, who have taken time out of their usual duties to train her in holy magic.  They are not necessarily friends, but more like a strict teacher and a sycophantic student.  Each knows the other has value, so they are respectful on the surface, but that is as far as it goes.  They are like a commodity to one another, in a sense.  This means that if that value ever disappears, either would be in trouble, so there is some concern on both sides for that, but it is largely self serving.

            Daryl doesn't have much of a baseline for a lot of the crew of Acacia.  Dakon and Echidna are frightening to her and she tends to keep them at arms length because of their status as Telnumbrans.  In spite of this, she at least knows her manners around those who have power, as evidenced by her submissive nature to Angelo and the other clergy, so she treats them with respect, especially since Echidna is kind to her.  She relies on Mina and Celine to get through many of these confrontations. 

            Aeon she only knows to be a lich and is naturally very scared, but also knows him for having saved her from many perils, so she is willing to look past that.  I would say she has a kind of respect for him, but doubts they can ever be friends. 

            Vincent and Daryl have a strained relationship.  While he is polite to her and her to him, his status as a teythen scares Daryl and she is wary of him.  Likewise, Vincent does not wish to antagonize her, as he recognizes her fear, so he does not try as hard to engage her as with the other girls.

            Daryl's affinity for Gadius is purely superficial.  He is like a more charming version of Angelo.  Very attractive, very in tune with nature and magic, very Lucarian.  She feels comfortable around him because he is something she believes she understands, both from her books and because he is Lucarian.  Aside from that, they don't have many interactions.
             
            Yuka and Daryl have a more cordial relationship, far more so than Celine and Yuka had at the beginning.  Daryl has no fear of neeg, though she does consider them somewhat second class.  However, she wants to know more about Yuka's devices, as she has a thirst for knowledge, so is polite enough and Yuka is always ready to engage a curiosity seeker.  Because neeg are part of Lucaria as well as Telnumbra, there is no tension between them and she is able to speak with her on a level close to an equal.  I would say that Daryl likes Yuka, but has no great interest in knowing her any further than she does.  The two are comfortable around one another, but not really friends.

            At first, Daryl and Deminos had a very antagonistic relationship, as she saw him as a layabout, squandering the gift of Gadius and Aeon's tutelage, which was very valuable.  She, as an aspiring mage herself, looked down on him for that.  However, after seeing Deminos's true nature, the stress he's been under, the fears he's been dealing with, I'd say they are far friendlier.  They are very parallel in their fears.  Deminos fears failure because it means expulsion from Acacia and from what friends he has, while Daryl fears it because it means all her ambitions will come to naught.  In a way, she sees her own future failure through Deminos...a possible future she doesn't want to let happen.  Because of that, however, and because she sees how hard he does work and is willing to go to cure himself of his affliction, she gains a respect for him that could almost be called friendship.  He is still Telnumbran and a bit unusual for her, but she has learned not to look down on him.

            Daryl is closest to Nerise.  She is very fond of the girl's childlike nature and how, despite being Telnumbran, she acts with such carefree, child like abandon that she doesn't seem either Lucarian or Telnumbran.  Nerise is merely Nerise.  Daryl was originally drawn to her because of her knowledge of void magic, as learning how to use it and counter it could be valuable to her, however over the course of their many discussions, which Nerise is always happy to give, she has grown fond of the little girl.  Nerise, in turn, has helped Daryl come out of her shell a little by introducing friends, teaching her not to fear the undead so much, and doing activities not related to magic, like baking.  The two are fast friends and Daryl sees both her superior, scholastically, and a little sister figure in Nerise.  She both looks up to Nerise, but also wants to set a good example for her.  She knows little of Nerise's past, but doesn't want to see her cry, so she holds Nerise's emotions in high regard and will work to help her find the good in life if she is ever sad.

            Along those same lines, Daryl started off in a strained relationship with Weiss and Kinana, as each was unusual and scary to her.  Goetians are typically called upon by Telnumbrans, so Daryl was immediately wary of Kinana and Weiss, as one of the first children, is a source of both awe and terror for her.  However, due to their connections to Nerise, she has grown closer to the two.  Kinana is like a big sister/mother figure to Nerise, so Daryl tries to respect her because of that and Weiss is her oldest friend and faithful ally, so she puts aside her awe and fear to not interrupt their friendship.

            Daryl also, as a more religious member of the group, has awe for anything she considers sacred.  The Dragons, as first children, are sources of awe and terror for her and she looks to Seran, the All-father, as an almost godlike figure, worthy of fear and respect.  The same could be said for other nihilons, like Granny.

            Daryl was originally meant to be a mouthpiece for the dogma of the clergy of Lucaria, to help flesh out the two sides of Serano, the disparity between Lucaria and Telnumbra.  She was going to be the disliked character, the one who tagged along, but who you couldn't exactly count on.  However, over the course of writing, she has evolved into a more realized and fleshed out character.  I'd have to say, I really like her because in spite of her flaws, she IS a good person and IS trying to be better.  She only has a few friends, is good scholastically and a hard worker, but her personality flaws sometimes make it hard for others to see the good in her.  Haha, in many ways, it's like me.  I suppose I see in Daryl the side of me that people don't look for.  There is a side to me that is elitist, but it's not my public face.  No, I see in Daryl the person who wants to be accepted for who she is, warts and all, but who can't because of some toxic mannerisms.  That being said, she does find friends she can rely on, so Daryl does mimic me in that regard as well.

            Daryl's one of my favorite characters to write for.  Mina's probably still my favorite character, period, but Daryl has evolved and grown so much.  I wanted Mina to be the center of the story and she's grown and changed in many ways, from being purely fearful, to being more outgoing, friendly, and even pro active, in spite of being a bit nervous and jittery around Aeon, however, I have to hand it to Daryl.  She's become much more than I originally intended for her.

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